Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime. Others, however, argue that the circumstances of an individual crime, and the motivation for committing it, should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment. Discuss both of these two views and give your own opinion.
Penal system of every country has predetermined punishments for criminal offences. But few people are of the opinion that punishments should be meted out, not only considering the type of crime, but also the motive behind it.
While those in favour of delivering sentences based on crime believe, that any crime is an act of doing things out of moral and ethical boundaries, and that such offences when handled with strict punishments can serve as deterrent for further crimes by both, the criminals and other members of society. Secondly, any motivation, even if it is of petty nature, suggests that the criminal has lower moral judgement and if this is ignored, it can further serve as a motivation to commit even more serious crimes in future. Therefore, it is better to nip this problem through set punishment.
However, it cannot be denied that sometimes crimes are caused because of failure of moral support systems. This is seen for e.g., in cases of, physical abuse, where sometimes victims are forced to commit crime in a bid to escape the violence. This extreme step is result of not having sufficient support from law and regulatory authorities. In such a scenario, a harsh punishment to the abuse victim for his or her crime is unjustified as the motive to commit crime is self- defense rather than to act out of law.
In conclusion, I believe, that it is essential to consider the circumstances and motivation behind the crime, as this will ensure that the punishments are justified.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, e.g., however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92913385827 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72958181801 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582677165354 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.867331336 49.4020404114 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.2 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.336650204293 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126330173966 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889021933409 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211140976251 0.151304729494 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709918457696 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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