Many people think regions affect successful persons. What is
your opinion about native regions and accomplished person influence
on the regions they belong to?
Whether regions affect successful persons have been the epicenter of discussion in multiple forums and a conclusive unanimous agreement is yet to be achieved. Different distinguished individuals have expressed their views both in favor and against the very idea of influence the society on achieving success through multiple modes of communication be it a main stream media or be it the social media. Below in essay of mine I will try to enunciate the fact that the success of a person does not affect him or her.
One of the most prominent reasons have a person needs to be more confident on his or her goals. Secondly, if someone has a dedication, motivation and hard working skills then nothing can stop him to achieve his desire ambition. Moreover, family support also plays a vital role in achievements.
Furthermore, there are many examples of people who have become successful person from destitute family without any support from the region. In addition, if a person has dedication to do what he wants to be in future then nobody can influence him. However, sometimes bad friend circle can try to mislead but with the help of self confidence anyone can stay away of theses mischievous.
While on the other hand, there are people who will continue to wrangling about the fact of region influence. However, we cannot be oblivious to the fact that regions affect successful persons. I would like to conclude that hardship and motivation is the most affective aspects to become a successful individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 6.10837438424 131% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 5.94088669951 84% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 31.9359605911 122% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 5.75862068966 208% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1265.0 1207.87684729 105% => OK
No of words: 253.0 242.827586207 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.92707691288 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80402399755 2.71678728327 103% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 139.433497537 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612648221344 0.580463131201 106% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 379.143842365 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.71428571429 175% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.65517241379 55% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.5024630542 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8414389218 50.4703680194 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.416666667 104.977214359 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0833333333 20.9669160288 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.33333333333 7.25397266985 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.33497536946 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 6.9802955665 158% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 2.75862068966 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235076528769 0.242375264174 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888189960919 0.0925447433944 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851690854703 0.071462118173 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141734072849 0.151781067708 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885976254347 0.0609392437508 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 12.6369458128 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 53.1260098522 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.9458128079 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 11.5310837438 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.32886699507 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 55.0591133005 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.94827586207 141% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.3980295567 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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