The illustration reveals the Brandsfield's birds eye view with proposals to where a shopping center is to be built in either s1 or s2 site. It is clearly seen that s1 located beside housing area while s2 is surrounded by railways and roads.
In the proposed sites, s1 is located in the northern part of the map and is a little under household areas. Also, in its east side is the river and in its west side is an area where the railway and the road meet. City center is found just below the site one.
On the other hand, site 2 is found in the south east area with railway on its right and road on its left. Above it is the city center and on its northeastern part is the industrial estate. The river is far from it compared to the first site and it has a vacant area on the west side that can be used for further expansion.
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- Below is a map of the city of Brandfield. City planners have decided to build a new shopping mall for the area, and two sites, S1 and S2 have been proposed.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where r 56
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 182, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er and in its west side is an area where the railway and the road meet. City cent...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 668.0 965.302439024 69% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12345679012 4.92477711251 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22930968542 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.524691358025 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 204.3 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.2783682613 43.030603864 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 112.824112599 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146888721272 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683465807195 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277595573638 0.0843802449381 33% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106528022296 0.15604864568 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0278525987155 0.0819641961636 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 13.2329268293 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.56 61.2550243902 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.62 11.4140731707 58% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.87 8.06136585366 85% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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