The diagram below shows the process for making a water clock.
The given diagram reveals the information about the procedure for making a water clock with the help of different kind of equipments. It is very clear and coherent representation.
It can be seen that the diagram shows the basic equipments are used like the one stand and two bottles are required which are used to fix in stand. There the one bottle which is full fix by the tape with stand. One other bottle is require which is head cut off. Moving ahead, one straw is fix on bottle with help of glue and also require the tap of water.
On next point the process is start of water clock. Firstly, the hole in the center of the full size bottle and cover the hole with finger before fill the top bottle to overflow. After this, the next step after fill up the bottle with water finger away from hole. As a result, the water in the ways of drops left in second bottle and time is calculate in per minute. If the water is empty that process is repeat again and again.
Overall, it is evident that this process require so much time , this is repeat again and again as well as gives only 5 to 10 minutes of time detail.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...he tape with stand. One other bottle is require which is head cut off. Moving ahead, on...
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Line 5, column 342, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'calculated'.
Suggestion: calculated
...drops left in second bottle and time is calculate in per minute. If the water is empty th...
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Line 5, column 405, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
.... If the water is empty that process is repeat again and again. Overall, it is evident th...
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Line 7, column 49, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... it is evident that this process require so much time , this is repeat again and ...
^^
Line 7, column 63, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... that this process require so much time , this is repeat again and again as well...
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Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeat'.
Suggestion: repeat
...process require so much time , this is repeat again and again as well as gives only 5 to 1...
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Line 7, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ch time , this is repeat again and again as well as gives only 5 to 10 minutes of...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, second, so, well, kind of, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 7.0 214% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 912.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30188679245 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.06375279049 2.65546596893 78% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533018867925 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6263611788 43.030603864 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0 112.824112599 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 5.23603664747 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 1.69756097561 412% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214664403302 0.215688989381 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837634794396 0.103423049105 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101621618807 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128064780831 0.15604864568 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0894236272959 0.0819641961636 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.2329268293 58% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 61.2550243902 116% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 10.3012195122 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.36 11.4140731707 64% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.64 8.06136585366 82% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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