The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of kolkata.

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The climograph below shows average monthly temperature and rainfall in the city of kolkata.

The given representation reveal the information about the number of temperature and precipitation in kolkata during a particular the period of month. The data is calebroted precipitation in mm, and the temperature in celcious form. It is clear, and coherent representation.

It can be seen that in the in the quarter of month the rainfall are start with 240 precipitation mm to 300mm. Moving ahead, in the month may to august the rain are decreased with the 60mm from the 300mm. Further, in the month of September to December the precipitation of rainfall also decreased and stand at the same level where they first stand at 240mm.

Apart from this, the temperature of in first quarter of month end at the -14°c, in under the month may to august the temperature is also increase at hight level 38° c, and at the last quarter of month in year the temperature are decreased highly at -18°c.

Overall, it is evident that the maximum rainfall in the month of may, and also the temperature is high in under the month of july but the least temperature is the in monthof December.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 21, Rule ID: PHRASE_REPETITION[1]
Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'in the'.
Suggestion: in the
... representation. It can be seen that in the in the quarter of month the rainfall are start...
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Line 3, column 341, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...stand at the same level where they first stand at 240mm. Apart from this, the ...
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Line 5, column 138, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'increased'.
Suggestion: increased
...h may to august the temperature is also increase at hight level 38° c, and at the last q...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, may, so, apart from

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 901.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 189.0 196.424390244 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7671957672 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89585763352 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 85.0 106.607317073 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.449735449735 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.3678496953 43.030603864 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.625 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242634088412 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107420542551 0.103423049105 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.069134021778 0.0843802449381 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165104389463 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0418713556882 0.0819641961636 51% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.12 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 40.7170731707 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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