Nowadays more tasks at home and work qre being performed by robots. Why do you think it is happening? It is a negative or positive development.
It is says that the sharing is good, and with digital technology, sharing is easy". With the rise in modernization. A man has transformed his life tremendously. He has progressed from walking bare footed in the jungles to take first step on the moon. Nevertheless, there are same issues which remain irrevocable and complex as even. For instance, the given topic asserts that is that robots are good or bad impact on the performance of home and work? I completely agree with the statement and shall explore the same from various aspects in following paragraphs.
Firstly, i clarify the work of robots in house. The people buy robots for increasing there status symbol as well as we told that they show off because the evey middle class people cannot afford the robots so some people who have more money they buy the robots. The robots help to save time and also it is very beneficial for those person who have busy schedules in their life. A good illustration of this the survey was conducted by the Hindustan times the result of this report only that people but the robot which have more money as compared to normal middle class people.
The second and formost important aspect that the need or importance of robots in work. The need of robots are very important because every people wants the more profit or name and fame. They also want to success and a good luxury life. For instance, nowadays the technology are very advanced and also the robots are faster as comapre to Human. Moving forward, with the help of robots we can easily produce more quantity of products. The human beaing cannot work 24 hours they want some time for rest but on the other hand the robots are doing work continuously 24 hours they do not need the rest and also produce in one second more quantity. A good example here is the report ware done by tribune for the high production the industries were use the robots but on the other hand the person who done their production with man power that was not able to produce more quantity of products.
As, we have seen that there are numbers of ansers to this question. On balance, however i tend to beleive that the advantages are out way fron their disadvantages. It is very important for human but people not fully depended on robots.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, nevertheless, second, so, well, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1873.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 403.0 315.596192385 128% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6476426799 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48049772903 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41025073331 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.483870967742 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.7297637582 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1904761905 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1904761905 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47619047619 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0892070360118 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0261488721583 0.084324248473 31% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326517444504 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0494345262552 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.022722684406 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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