One should only use enough money to fulfill their needs and rest should gives to needy. To what extent you agree and disagree?
It is says that " money is not only a answer, but it makes difference". In the current time of technological advancement. One of the most pressing concern is regarding the given topic should after fillings the basic needs money give to the needy people or not? I completely disagree with the statement and shall explore the various aspects in the following paragraphs.
I totally disagree with the statement because it is not take part in growth. In other words, the money should oftenly misused and the people cannot do hardwork although very lethargic. As a result, the development of country should not be possible. In other words, the money which are received in free from any other person the people also misuse of that money like: some people are drug. A good example here is: in the crowdy areas so money beggars are available and the some beggars are use the money for drug.
On the other hand, the development of poor people are not the responsibility of only individual, it is also the responsibility of government. Because the people pay tax to the government for improvement of poor people. In other words, the 60% people in india below the poverty line so the people pay tax for main development of country. Government do the equality to all. A basic illustration here is survey was conducted by government of India ad saw result government give facilities to children like free education and some other facilities to poor people.
As we have seen that there are number kf answers to this question. On balance, however, i tend to beleive that it is the responsibility of government as well as individual but the first main indicative taken by the government the individual should only part of this system.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...t is says that ' money is not only a answer, but it makes difference'. ...
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...t be possible. In other words, the money which are received in free from any othe...
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... so money beggars are available and the some beggars are use the money for drug. ...
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...main development of country. Government do the equality to all. A basic illustrati...
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...main development of country. Government do the equality to all. A basic illustrati...
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...ome other facilities to poor people. As we have seen that there are number kf a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, so, well, as a result, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 19.0 8.3376753507 228% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.86531986532 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83997503038 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488215488215 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.5503339811 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3125 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5625 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163154301705 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0520488573373 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538302953098 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105813366179 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.066859732876 0.056905535591 117% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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