Infrastructure in your classroom is not good for studying. Write your classroom manager as the monitor to complain about the issue and request a transfer to a high quality room.
Dear Madam,
I am a monitor of a language class who are learning in Room C20 where the conditions are unfavorable. Hence, I am writing you to not only present some problems what we are coping with but also require you to solve these issues as soon as possible.
The first issue is that the room is pretty dark since some lights do not work; therefore, it is quite difficult for us to note content of lessons. In addition, the noise from the near-by crowded road makes us get difficult to practice listening skill. Lastly, number of tables is insufficient for a thirty- student class, so we always feel uncomfortable when studying in such a narrow space.
With above problems of my classroom, I hope to be allowed to switch into a better quality one; otherwise, our studying results can be affected seriously. I am looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Harry
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Madam, I am a monitor of a language class who a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, if, lastly, look, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 32.9175257732 46% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 681.0 937.175257732 73% => OK
No of words: 141.0 206.0 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82978723404 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.44591672665 3.78020617076 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73512548578 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.730496453901 0.622605031667 117% => OK
syllable_count: 208.8 290.88556701 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.0237639391 44.8134815571 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.125 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 16.8248392259 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.25 4.34317383033 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133307939552 0.216113520407 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0512287678932 0.0766984524023 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0437216849074 0.0603063233224 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0640870368592 0.12726935374 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0037341482619 0.0580467560999 6% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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