As housing is a basic need for people, government should provide free housing for everyone who cant't afford it, To what extend do you agree or disagree?
lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades. Presently, due to modernization shelter has become a basic need of mankind. According to some people authority should provide houses to need folks without any cost. Here I am disagree with the given statement.
To Begin with,in this contemporary era government had already provided their citizens with plethora of schemes such as Pension, unemployment wages and so on. to the needy person and therefore they do not toil to earn back and belly. Hence, peoples are used to enjoy these free facilities which are being provided by the administration. Moreover,by getting free houses from the authority the expectation of poor people will increase dramatically.
Moving further, government should spend on serious problems instead of providing shelter to the public free of cost. Authority should spend on health disorder, poverty, unemployment and so on are spreading its roots in number of developing and developed nations. As a result, government fund have to be invested on the solution of these concerns for the betterment of people.
On another hand, countries such as India, South Africa, Bangladesh poverty is at peak level, where people even do not have had wages to build their own house. So, authority should provide them house where they could try to make their future bright and the kids of poor family will get opportunity to get education. Hence, juvenile will burn mid night oil by having healthy environment of their own houses.
To recapitulate, without having own shelter life would be like "eyes without vision". Government should needy family but in some extend because there are ample of another issues which consumes plethora of money.
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Comments
sir am able to get 6.5 ?
sir i am able to get 6.5 ? according to this taks
Yes, you do. Still there are
Yes, you do. Still there are some grammatical issues.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Lifestyle
lifestyle has undergone dramatic changes over a c...
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Line 1, column 243, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'disagreed'.
Suggestion: disagreed
... need folks without any cost. Here I am disagree with the given statement. To Begin wit...
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Line 2, column 14, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , in
...with the given statement. To Begin with,in this contemporary era government had al...
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Line 2, column 344, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , by
...provided by the administration. Moreover,by getting free houses from the authority ...
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Line 5, column 139, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...ernment should needy family but in some extend because there are ample of another issu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, moreover, so, therefore, such as, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27075812274 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77933795484 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.620938628159 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4149456643 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.25 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.230631330462 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0655998208381 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443974645511 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117948048827 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0387363401126 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.99 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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