The following appeared in a letter to the editor of the Balmer Island Gazette The population on Balmer Island doubles during the summer months During the summer then the town council of Balmer Island should decrease the maximum

In this letter, the author concludes that the town BalmerIsland should limit the number of moped rentals. To support this conclusion, the author points out that moped is a popular form of transportation and involved in many pedestrian accidents. Furthermore, the author sets the neighboring island of Seaville that achieved accidents reduction by such limitation as a typical example to support the recommendation. However, these all constitute a problematic argument in favor of its conclusion and fail to provide convincing support making this argument sound and invulnerable.

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Average: 7.6 (6 votes)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, furthermore, however, if, may, so, then, thus, well, while, for example, in short, such as, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.6327345309 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 11.1786427146 143% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 28.8173652695 118% => OK
Preposition: 81.0 55.5748502994 146% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 16.3942115768 195% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3270.0 2260.96107784 145% => OK
No of words: 584.0 441.139720559 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.59931506849 5.12650576532 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.91590194646 4.56307096286 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22859850136 2.78398813304 116% => OK
Unique words: 301.0 204.123752495 147% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.515410958904 0.468620217663 110% => OK
syllable_count: 1016.1 705.55239521 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.70958083832 185% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 1.67365269461 239% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.22255489022 189% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.8082833207 57.8364921388 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.769230769 119.503703932 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4615384615 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 5.70786347227 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 5.15768463074 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.25449101796 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.20758483034 61% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 6.88822355289 232% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.67664670659 107% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0580288387888 0.218282227539 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0174130165324 0.0743258471296 23% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0268951234658 0.0701772020484 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0313604180413 0.128457276422 24% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0259889217766 0.0628817314937 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 14.3799401198 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.1628742515 156% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.5 12.5979740519 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 172.0 98.500998004 175% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 12.3882235529 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.

Rates: 16.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 6
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 5.0 out of 6
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 26 15
No. of Words: 584 350
No. of Characters: 3166 1500
No. of Different Words: 289 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.916 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.421 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.069 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 254 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 196 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 139 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 97 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.462 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 7.207 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.577 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.257 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.505 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.042 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 6 5