A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stay with him/her on your next holiday. You are too busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Thank him/her for the invitation.
Explain why you cannot come
Ask him about other times to visit.
You need to write at least 150 words.
Begin your letter with
Dear...
Dear XXX,
I am writing to thank you for your invitation. I felt glad after seeing your invite, but unfortunately, due to my current hectic schedule I will not be able to make it.
Let me explain my situation in more details. As you are aware the fact that I have recently bought a land, there I am planning to build house during my holidays. Since this is going to be my first experience, I have to gather plenty of details regarding the house construction and also need to roam a lot. Moreover, because my parents are aged, even they will not be able to take of this work in a proper manner.
If you are free, any time after Oct 2018 please let me know. I have a leave for one month, which I can use to spend time with you and your family. I am more willing to see your children and play with them. Also, I heard that Melbourne is such a fantastic place to visit. I am so excited to see it.
Eagerly waiting for your reply.I look forward to hearing from you.
With love,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 394, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...y will not be able to take of this work in a proper manner. If you are free, any time after Oct...
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Line 8, column 32, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...e it. Eagerly waiting for your reply.I look forward to hearing from you. With...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, moreover, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 803.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 190.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.22631578947 4.54256449028 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31040642298 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636842105263 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 252.0 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5344937117 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.7692307692 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 4.34317383033 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19971156181 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0766121563669 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.091578584531 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143264702604 0.12726935374 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693605362603 0.0580467560999 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.66 8.71597938144 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.66 7.59969072165 88% => OK
difficult_words: 28.0 41.2886597938 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.