Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Only people who earn a lot of money are successful. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Success has always been a significant part of humans' lives because it is a viable way to have a wealthy and nice life. But, what is success? Does it have the same significance for every individual? Some say that having a lot of money equals to being successful. Others gainsays this, asserting that success represents the ability to do what makes one happy. As far as I am concerned, I agree with the later statement. This is due to that success means also recognition and moreover because some people see success in the simplest aspects of live. I will explain my statement in the following essay.
To begin with, there are people who are talented in a great variety of fields. For them being successful means being respected for their work and receiving appreciation for theirs efforts and realizations. In other words, artists such as actors, singers, painters, writers want to expose their works, and based on these to gain recognition at a high level. Moreover, this struggle to outline their art is not easy to achieve, because there is a tremendous competition at a global level. This means that thousands of persons who are talented, fight to make themselves and their work famous, but unfortunately only a few of them manage to achieve this goal. Therefore, when they reach this point, it can be asserted that they are successful.
To continue with, besides the aforementioned aspects, success can not be reduced to socials status, a career, to money and to fame. It is different in every culture, country, society. In my opinion, success can be related to happiness, having a family, to love and to be loved, to become someone who can live in harmony with the rest of the world. For instance, there are people who still live isolated, in tribes, without any kinds of technologies or modern devices. I am sure that for them success is not linked to money or fame, but to the fact that they can live in peace with the other members. Furthermore, their success is about little things, things that might look insignificant for outsiders, banal, valueless. This could be offering food to their offspring, sewing clothes, making tools, being skilled in hunting, cooking and so forth.
To summarize, there are many paths to achieve success, because each individual perceive it differently. An individual is successful when he reaches his goal, which can be money, fame, appreciation, recognition, living a simple and modest live.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, if, look, moreover, so, still, therefore, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 15.1003584229 172% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.0286738351 136% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 52.1666666667 102% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2030.0 1977.66487455 103% => OK
No of words: 412.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92718446602 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50530610838 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74556944356 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 212.727598566 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563106796117 0.524837075471 107% => OK
syllable_count: 628.2 618.680645161 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.94265232975 223% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 20.6003584229 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.945456503 48.9658058833 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2608695652 100.406767564 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9130434783 20.6045352989 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.17391304348 5.45110844103 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.5376344086 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111944851664 0.236089414692 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0396927698681 0.076458572812 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470704797536 0.0737576698707 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0679902171963 0.150856017488 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0363580128032 0.0645574589148 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 11.7677419355 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 10.9000537634 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 86.8835125448 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 80.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.0 Out of 30
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