Some people support the development of agriculture, like factory farming and the scientific creation of fruits and vegetables, while others oppose.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
There is a big debate about whether agricultural developments are the best solutions or the most dangerous way in order to provide enough food for society. Although both approaches have some benefits and drawbacks, I believe that advantageous of traditional farming is outweigh modern farming.
There are significant improvements on farming like factory farming, scientifically created foods, seeds and their benefits are undeniable. They are fastest and easiest way to supply food especially in metropolitan cities and developed countries where livestock are is demanding. Furthermore, farmers or factories have more product from a seed. It prevents food shortage, decreases cost of transportation and production and it results in more affordable product prices that means people from different income status’ can access same kind foods and whenever they want not depends on season.
Nevertheless, there are many groups and people who oppose modern farming and support traditional agricultural methods in terms of environmental and health problems. Seeds are scientifically altered and they lose their organic features. It is not possible to get organic products from these modified seeds and they are possible threat for extinction of authentic seeds. It is also common to use antibiotics in both farming and animals to strength of stamina. These antibiotics cause some serious disease such as cancer. Moreover, factory farming and animal production have catastrophic effects on the environment, animals and society such as air and underground water pollution, health problems etc.
In conclusion, Modern farming is the best approach for sustainable food production in short term but its effect on health, ecology and society are irreversible. Fantastic. Thus, conventional farming must be continue and I think new better, harmless developments must be integrated.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, thus, i think, in conclusion, in short, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1614.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.74377224199 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09728368843 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.8819013434 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.285714286 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.78571428571 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148161413924 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0527873369117 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0356934543759 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0859898509466 0.151304729494 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0187529839039 0.056905535591 33% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.01 12.4159519038 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.