The bar chart illustrates the earnings of Someland’s primary exports in various sectors i.e. meat products, dairy products, and international tourism surveyed in three different years by 2005, 2015, and 2025. The data was shown in USD billion. Overall, dairy products and international tourism became the top sectors in gaining Someland’s profit over the time, while meat product was reported to be the smallest portion in contributing Someland’s benefits.
In 2005, international tourism was recorded to achieve the biggest revenue by above 6 USD billion compared to meat products and dairy products getting only 4 USD billion and around 5 USD billion, respectively. Ten years later, dairy products grew dramatically by almost 8 USD billion, being the highest income of Someland’s exported sectors. Having the same trend, international tourism experienced a slight inclining progression by about 7 USD billion. Meanwhile, meat product had a declining trend in just above 3 USD billion. In 2025, the trend of international tourism was predicted to grow further in almost 8 USD billion. Having a contrast report, both dairy and meat product were expected to fall down in around 3 USD billion and about 7 USD billion, sequentially. (194 words)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 965.302439024 111% => OK
No of words: 196.0 196.424390244 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44387755102 4.92477711251 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21496186604 2.65546596893 121% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 305.1 283.868780488 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.6518931098 43.030603864 164% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.555555556 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7777777778 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 5.23603664747 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0840186656658 0.215688989381 39% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395797264984 0.103423049105 38% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0426776089504 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0874875527109 0.15604864568 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0448264568046 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.1 13.2329268293 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 11.4140731707 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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