Multicultural societies, in which there is a mixture of different ethnic peoples, bring more benefits than drawbacks to a country.
Since the time immemorial, the multicultural societies have prospered enormously when compared to those based on single ideology. History is replete with numerous instances showcasing the fact that people belonging to disparate origins but being part of a single society has proved to be a contributing factor in the uplifting of the great nations. Therefore, in my opinion, the advantages of multicultural societies obviously outweighs there shortcomings.
Multicultural societies, firstly, are much more interesting as they bring people from various religions and races into a single umbrella; resulting in social equality and religious harmony across the nation. Great countries such as the USA, Australia, and the UK were formed by the indigenous people from various races who had migrated from different countries and formed an excellent multicultural nation having an efficient development model. Secondly, a society made up of people from different races would balance the political power to be distributed among common people, instead of having a central power which is very common among many of the GCC countries, where they are ruled by people with single race and religion.
A society formed by people from various cultures have had produced best-in-class eminent scholars, artists, scientists, and authors, as they share the beauty of different schools of thoughts and come up with beautiful combinations. The USA, for instance, is behind the invention of various groundbreaking technologies and solutions for many of the problems faced by the earth, and if we closely look at the success behind them, it would be evident that these results were only possible due to the contribution from scientists from various races. More importantly, people living in a multicultural society are more tolerant towards each other resulting in a peaceful and brotherly environment for a living.
On the other hand, few of the multicultural societies does show some signs of negative elements, such as racial discrimination and religious intolerance, these, however, are being strictly treated and thwarted by the leaders of the society and can be considered to be almost eradicated.
From the above argument, it can be concluded that, although multicultural societies might have certain shortcomings, the benefits and interesting aspects it brings are enormous and clearly outweighs the drawbacks.
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- You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, for instance, in short, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 366.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57650273224 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08225423033 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.560109289617 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 633.6 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.7550479752 49.4020404114 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 185.545454545 106.682146367 174% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.2727272727 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5454545455 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.115124826326 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0518188522927 0.084324248473 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415431786771 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0648391513107 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0325176483396 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.5 13.0946893788 164% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 29.52 50.2224549098 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.3 11.3001002004 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.68 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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