Light corporal punishment is being introduced in schools of UK what are the advantages and disadvantages? Discuss
Schools are like a temple which children's get knowledge on educational based and social activities.one of the most contraversial issue today relates to should light corporal punishment is being introduced in schools of UK? In this essay I am going to examine this question front both points of by
On one side of the argument there are people argue that childrens are lived in discipline and dedication with light corporal punishment.Moreover they afraid from teachers,and do better performance in their studies.further they improve their personality . Delhi University is surveyed that most of the schools they visit and carry information about behaviour and study improvement of students they wrote on their information students are doing well with punishment and they recommends it should compulsory for all schools.
On the other hand it can greatly effect on relations reason behind when teacher gave punishment to students they feel heart broken in ego and make bad relationship between teacher and student. As well as they donot respect their teachers . Furthermore, they disappointed in their studies.Moreover, sometimes students irritates teacher. One example here , in senior secondary school teacher punished the students for bad result in first semester after that when teacher come back to school some students has worned to teacher for punishment.
In the crux, it should compulsory for all the schools for better performance and maintain discipline.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, moreover, second, so, well, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1246.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53777777778 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14645833622 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608888888889 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 89.9109802805 49.4020404114 182% => OK
Chars per sentence: 155.75 106.682146367 146% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 20.7667163134 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.625 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155146875158 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0709816836193 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952072785871 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105098998907 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856835455713 0.056905535591 151% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.7 13.0946893788 143% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 50.2224549098 86% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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