Dear Robinson,
I am writing to bring it to your notice the trouble being caused by the trash disposal from your house. Allow me to elaborate.
I along with my wife recently moved to your neighborhood from Asheville and it is really pleasant here. Especially, the architecture of some buildings, and the lake adjacent to the community fascinated me to move here.
However, my joy did not last long. Since last couple of days, a large amount of waste is being disposed in my backyard by your tenants. This is causing a bad odour which is unbearable at times. Every evening we are welcomed by this unpleasant experience and it makes me question about my decision to move here.
I know this is an unintended act as the trash collecting agency is on strike. Nevertheless, there is a private company named GP Associates, who pick the garbage for an extra charge. I can provide you their phone number if necessary. Kindly, contact them as soon as possible; otherwise this will impact our health condition as well.
I hope you take some action very quickly.
Yours sincerely,
Jonathon Regan
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, nevertheless, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 916.0 937.175257732 98% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87234042553 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70411637322 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.702127659574 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2937490585 44.8134815571 77% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4285714286 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4285714286 16.8248392259 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.07142857143 4.34317383033 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0545907871968 0.216113520407 25% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0179042998042 0.0766984524023 23% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029030673542 0.0603063233224 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0307548910613 0.12726935374 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0208998469774 0.0580467560999 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 8.37731958763 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 70.7449484536 82% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.37 8.71597938144 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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