Nowadays, number of people prefer to attend colleges and universities for a new experience, career preparation and increased knowledge. Especially in developed countries most of the people have done bachelor degrees. It is agreed that universities and colleges increase people’s knowledge and build up their career. This essay I will analyze the reasons in detail.
One of the most important examples that most of the parents want their children to go to the universities is that build up their future. Inhabitants of modern societies understand the value of universities and colleges education positive effect on people. For example, number of people are interested in emerging technologies and they study on it. Due to, they would increase their knowledge.
On the other hand, most of the people want to have a proper job and a great life, due to people go to university and college to educate themselves. For instance, in Australia, there are many career training schools such as Tafe and King trade school.
These schools train the students such as plumbing, hairdressing, electrician and etc. Therefore, number of students go to these occupation schools.
However, in the past decade year’s people attending colleges and universities are continuously increasing from day to day.
Because most of the people want to shape their career and life. For this reason, they prefer to make high education in the universities.
In light of above-supported arguments, is concluded that there are so many people are educated and they have a career, because of making a good life for selves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: AND_ETC[1]
Message: Use simply 'etc.'.
Suggestion: etc.
... as plumbing, hairdressing, electrician and etc. Therefore, number of students go to the...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, therefore, for example, for instance, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1353.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30588235294 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99856687543 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.9705233018 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.5625 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9375 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0625 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334480837878 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110862228581 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0869365338972 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165232274041 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0923832605552 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.22 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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