Government should focus their spending on public service rather than on arts such as music and painting.
Art reflect the culture and heritage of a nation as well as creativity of an artist . presently, public services need hefty sum of money by the authority as compared to art. lets ponder deeper to have more clarity on this topic.
one school of thought reckon that administration has abundance problem already which spread their roots in this globe. to instance,problem like poverty, starvation, health disorder and air pollution are spreading their roots in developed and developing countries. hence,government fund have to be invested on the solution of there concerns for the betterment of folks. moreover, as pollution is being mushrooming day by day where authority should spend on public transport and public transport should be well equipped with salient features along with economical rates. As a result,folks will prefer public transport instead of their own vehicle which helps to uproot pollution menace.
probing further, government ought to build libraries, school and hospitals in remote areas.To exemplify, by having these facilities life could be very convenient of the citizens and literacy level will upsurge. beside this, job should be created by the authority in every thick where folk can toil to perform well to earn back and belly. hence, authority should look after the public.
Another school of thought deem that, art and craft horizon the broaden of once mind.As it is well said that without art life would be like soup without salt.Furthermore, public places are being decorated by the painters which surge the beauty of town with leaps and bounds. beside this, by learning art creativity will boost which would be very lucrative for the public in their entire life.Moreover, music is a good source of amusement and ought to supported by the administration hence, authority should finance the art. As,speaks the thousand words.
To recapitulate, i pen down saying that art in important in this contemporary era. However government should work on another big issues as well as on citizens services.
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Comments
sir how many vocabulary words
sir how many vocabulary words ought to be there to take 6.5?
is my sentence formation is accurate?
the average words and unique
the average words and unique words are 315 and 176, look:
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
but you don't need to follow it exactly.
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is my sentence formation is accurate?
Yes, but you don't need to put transition words for every sentence. Just wanted sometimes .
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'reflects'.
Suggestion: reflects
Art reflect the culture and heritage of a nation as...
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...ation as well as creativity of an artist . presently, public services need hefty s...
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...ote areas.To exemplify, by having these facilities life could be very convenient of the ci...
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...tizens and literacy level will upsurge. beside this, job should be created by the auth...
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...ence, authority should finance the art. As,speaks the thousand words. To recapi...
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...ce, authority should finance the art. As,speaks the thousand words. To recapitulate,...
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... in important in this contemporary era. However government should work on another big i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1712.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28395061728 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87455105834 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577160493827 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.8095344043 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.0 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.125 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.223109528457 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0698015649818 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051823072835 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12085419506 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0254938446531 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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