Quite often, we see people point out talent of sportsmen or musicians or actors. Talent is an immense ability of an individual that helps him or her outperform his opponents. However, it’s origin is many times a topic of debate. While some consider it as an innate trait, others argue that it is attained from continuous efforts.
To elaborate, there is an opinion among many that talent is an entity which humans inherit genetically from their parents. This view especially arises when they encounter a child with a particular skill which looks outstanding. For example, child prodigy, musician Mozart is described as a wonder kid and his abilities are often considered inborn.
That being said, the underlying endeavors and regular attempts to achieve such position are mostly ignored. In other words, there are considerable number of successful individuals from many fields who created a name for themselves through rigorous practice and dedication. One good example is Lionel Messi who was once eliminated from an under-12 team and considered an ineligible candidate for soccer. Today, he is a superstar with more than a billion fans around the globe. A simple reason behind such a turnaround is his significant hard work. This scenario is also common among other legendary players and actors.
On the whole, I think talent is often confused with other human characteristics such as height, weight, and color. This in particular happens when people come across young icons with superior skills or intelligence. However, talent can be obtained by any person irrespective of age or background and can be maintained only with continuous practice and corrections.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, while, for example, i think, in particular, such as, in other words, on the whole
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28464419476 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82488883214 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.662921348315 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.4909525113 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.1875 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6875 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.875 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168868162844 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0493598308838 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420815005725 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100846655029 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035767474753 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.63 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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