You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You find some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it-what is the article about?-what is the error?-what you expect an editor to do?

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You recently read an article in newspaper about someone you know personally. You find some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it
-what is the article about?
-what is the error?
-what you expect an editor to do?

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter regarding an article which is published on 23rd April on The Daily Newspaper. This article is about Mr. Rahul Mishra, who is a famous social worker. I found some mistakes in that documentation.

The very first mistake is that he joined a no government organisation in the year 1985 when he was 22 years old. But you have written that he became a part of the same in 1980 at the age of 23. Both of the information are not appropriate. Moreover, you have also mentioned about his family that he has two children. But in fact, he has only one daughter and no other baby.

I hereby request you to update this article and also mention a little bit on the beginning that the last article was written by mistake. I hope you will consider it as valuable information because i am very close to that personality. He happens to be my uncle.

I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience.

Yours Faithfully
Kulwant Singh

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...s only one daughter and no other baby. I hereby request you to update this arti...
^^^
Line 7, column 64, Rule ID: LITTLE_BIT[1]
Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
... update this article and also mention a little bit on the beginning that the last article ...
^^^^^^^^^^
Line 7, column 198, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ider it as valuable information because i am very close to that personality. He h...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, look, moreover, regarding, so, in fact

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 816.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61016949153 4.54256449028 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7019711253 2.54303337028 106% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 127.690721649 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.655367231638 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 254.7 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.2010194468 44.8134815571 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.7692307692 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6153846154 16.8248392259 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.229497633824 0.216113520407 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0708204675103 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0551862038894 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131546927404 0.12726935374 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035489127787 0.0580467560999 61% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.87 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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