Dear Sir,
I am Hindu, a regular customer to your supermarket. The main reason I intended to write this letter was to lodge a complain against a food product i.e., one kg milky mist curd bucket, bought at your store lately, which after reaching home found to be spoiled.
To begin with, I visited your store on 17th Aug 2018 (Friday) at 6.00 pm to purchase milk products. Elucidating the incident on detail, I usually purchase one kg curd bucket from the manufacturer milky mist. Although, deliberately checked the expiry date, the product (when I opened to consume it after going home) spotted to be putrescent and malodorous. I believe this happened because of deficient and poor refrigeration.
What actions would you consider taking in this case? I would appreciate your diligence in informing me about the same and in addition, please also mention what measures you are going to take in future to prevent such kind of negligence issues.
I hope this issue will be looked into on a priority basis and a timely resolution is provided to a loyal customer like me. I look forward to hearing from you on this incident.
Yours faithfully,
Hindu.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...m the manufacturer milky mist. Although, deliberately checked the expiry date, th...
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Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s provided to a loyal customer like me. I look forward to hearing from you on thi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, so, as to, in addition, kind of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 26.3917525773 125% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 965.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89847715736 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68220199261 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.670050761421 0.622605031667 108% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1476801255 44.8134815571 125% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7272727273 76.5299724578 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9090909091 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.27272727273 4.34317383033 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245738432769 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765788893532 0.0766984524023 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511075555993 0.0603063233224 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126471942154 0.12726935374 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0533424798747 0.0580467560999 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 8.37731958763 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 70.7449484536 89% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 7.45979381443 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 8.71597938144 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 41.2886597938 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.