Dear Jessica,
Hope you are doing well and it was fantastic to have spent my holiday week with you. I miss you already. I would like to thank you for making my holiday week indelible with truckloads of good times. Although, we really enjoyed the campfire and barbecue dinner we have had in the beach, I personally felt that our trip to Montana waterfalls was wonderful and those waterfalls were whimsical. I relish those holiday moments and also shared them with my mother. I am really grateful to you for all those memorable times during my holiday week.
The reason why I’m writing this letter is that I forgot my wallet in your house. After reaching home this morning, while checking for wallet to pay for the cab, I realized that my wallet is not present with me and I left it in your house. It was the intense vermilion tinted wallet with a unicorn amulet that I carried when we visited the Opera. After returning from the Opera, the last thing I remember was I placed it on the trestle in the dressing room and forgot carrying it with me while coming back home.
Could you please courier my wallet as soon as possible? Even though, I believe there were no precious items in the wallet, I need it immediately, as it contains my college identity card and driving license. While you send the courier, before putting the wallet in the outer packaging box, please pack it using an impermeable bubble wrap. Make sure the packaging box is securely plastered and courier it to the address below:
Ms. Rena,
Flat no: 201,
Richardman Apartments,
48 Beckham Street,
Wyoming,
USA.
Our excursions, long dinners and wild nights won't be forgotten soon. I am looking forward to spending a holiday week with you again.
Till next time,
Rena.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 21, column 90, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to spending'.
Suggestion: to spending
...be forgotten soon. I am looking forward to spend holiday week with you again. Till ne...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, anyway, look, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 32.9175257732 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 26.3917525773 121% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1546.0 937.175257732 165% => OK
No of words: 325.0 206.0 158% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75692307692 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 3.78020617076 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39031576731 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 127.690721649 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 290.88556701 160% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 8.0 1.83505154639 436% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3552566402 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.8888888889 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0555555556 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.38888888889 4.34317383033 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.29896907216 186% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 7.41237113402 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367387811445 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121468814145 0.0766984524023 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0932077614259 0.0603063233224 155% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160030100595 0.12726935374 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0976954109006 0.0580467560999 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 8.37731958763 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 8.71597938144 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 41.2886597938 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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