Some people argue that it is better to be unemployed than to be employed in jobs they do not enjoy.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Job satisfaction is one of the fundamental bases for successful career and happy life. To which, it is believed by some people that staying unemployed is more favorable until one land a dream job. In my opinion, although it is extremely uncomfortable work on tasks without content, surviving without a proper cash inflow is even more difficult.
To Begin with, there is no denying to the fact that desirable job is a key to success. To be successful, it demands huge commitment and blood sweating hard work, which can be immensely frustrating if someone hates his job. This dissatisfaction gradually spread over other aspect of life, such as personal life, like a poison destroying the whole body. For example, people who are not satisfied with their work are more vulnerable to metal diseases, such as depression because of continuous failure at work, according to study. Thus, delightful work is essential to lead healthy and fruitful life.
However, it is certainly not acceptable to sit idle until the required opportunities are presented. Not only it puts people under enormous financial pressure but also a huge burden on nation’s economy as governments have to supply unemployment grants to them. Rather than struggling with money to meet basic needs by being jobless, it easier to work on menial jobs in the initial days of career until appropriate break is awarded. Most of the famous people, for example, have taken up part-time jobs to support themselves until they made big in to their respective fields. Thus, job hunting and life becomes simpler with financial security from other jobs.
In conclusion, although landing a favorite job is everybody’s fantasy, it is certainly unadvisable to stay at home until one secures such jobs. The easiest way is to keep working while waiting and preparing for the dream position.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.13907284768 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89061278908 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635761589404 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.2085109618 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.466666667 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1333333333 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.06666666667 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125818052396 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403808941023 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04373171212 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.071990911462 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320304974857 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.