The performance of staff can have a significant impact on the success of a company. What can companies do to inclined staff productivities.
With rise in modernisation. A man has transferred his life tremondously. He has progressed from walking a barefooted in the jungle to take first step on moon. Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and complex. As ever for instance. This topic asserts that should the impact of work on company development by employees ; those are major factor or not? through this essay. I shall explore the same from various aspects in the following paragraphs.
To conclude is that when employees are conscientious as well as good people . Then company automatically progressed by employees work process because it is depends upon people thinks.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that company development depends upon work does by employees. Because neither employees are not well nor any other facilities provide . Then the results automatically is negative. Although, these types of improvements that is only do by working man not possible any other machines as well as robots. Because robots ,and machinery not do well from human.when person are do any work proper concentration ,and conscientious through it well improvements also obtained in company for progressed.
On other hand, there is some other people who believe that there is other biggest factor is more ,and more salaries provided by owner . Because they gives fixed salary to their employees through it. People are do they work totally. However, company also provide some facilities for development as well as employees impressed from it ,and then do work fully understanding. Moreover, company obtained well qualified product without any other mistake this is only done by their employees. Afterthat, employees are gain promotion by company owner ,and gain a fundamental position.
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- When a country develop its technology, traditional skills and way of life die out. It is pointless to try and keep them alive do you agree, disagree 56
- Some people believe they should keep all the money they have earned and should not pay tax to the state 61
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- Now days people throw away old things and adapt new things .do the disadvantages of throwaway society outweigh any possible economic advantages. 11
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1501.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34163701068 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95440680078 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519572953737 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.468235855 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 71.4761904762 106.682146367 67% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.380952381 20.7667163134 64% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.28571428571 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0669866990028 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0198922342319 0.084324248473 24% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0251276235773 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0429118631226 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.014674797648 0.056905535591 26% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 49.82 50.2224549098 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.1 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 9.78957915832 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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