You have recently joined to a new job. Write a letter to your English-speaking friend. In your letter
Explain why u moved from previous job
Describe your new job
Tell your friend any news you want to share
Dear Alice,
How are you doing? It’s been a long while since we communicated. I have a great news to share from my end. Didn't I tell you about the job opening at Venice Solutions? I cleared all rounds of interviews and now selected as a UI Designer, working since last week. I was held up with certain issues here, so couldn’t inform you. As you know, my previous job was purely occupied with intense work pressure. The constant requirement of production support during weekends made me go mad. To add on, our working hours rose to more than 10 hours per day. I couldn’t tolerate this situation and decided to take a wise decision to move in here.
And you know what? I’m loving my new job. The organisation follows a fixed number of working hours and proper delegation of work for all its employees. Also, the new office is only about 10 miles from my home. They offer a decent package with good benefits. I’m really happy to be working for this organisation.
Are you having any plans this weekend? If yes, then cancel them right away because I’m planning to host a party to our close buddies at my home. Do make it without any excuses. Waiting to hear from you.
Best wishes,
Krithika.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'great news'.
Suggestion: great news
...ong while since we communicated. I have a great news to share from my end. Didnt I tell you ...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Didn't
...have a great news to share from my end. Didnt I tell you about the job opening at Ven...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, so, then, while, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 217.0 206.0 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68202764977 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8380880478 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56538443654 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.700460829493 0.622605031667 113% => OK
syllable_count: 311.4 290.88556701 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 12.6804123711 166% => OK
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.3451940419 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 48.380952381 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.3333333333 16.8248392259 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.04761904762 4.34317383033 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143703757917 0.216113520407 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0496173370469 0.0766984524023 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051667649683 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101149305017 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0131107201498 0.0580467560999 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.38 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.63 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 8.62886597938 52% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.