Some people think that only society should be responsible for any anti-social activities. What are the causes for these activities. Who is responsible for them?
It is true said that" society is like a straw. If you do not stor it up every once in a while then a layer of scum floats to the top" and.we should obey rules of society. The particular topic asserts that should society be blamed for evils; Anti-social activities such as drinking, smoking. I am totally agreed with statement and shall explain some reason for this trend.
To begin with, the first and foremost reason behind this evil is lack of awareness among people. They even do not know the exact reason of this evil. The cause of unawareness is lack of education because as we live in 21st century but there are still many masses who faced in education and that was why most people choose to wrong path and swayed from their path. A good epitome of this could be a survey conducted by Delhi school community, claimed that about 83% of crime held in country due to unawareness about crime among people.
Probing ahead, next cause of this evil is social media because there are many things in television or in mobile phones which gives a wrong message to youth. Instead, of admiring from their role models they come to know many bad things. They abused their parents even they harm themselves too. For instance, a television actor drinked alcohol in serial and same was follow by a 15 years old boy which causes his death.
To conclude, I tend to believe that it is responsibility of government to make strict laws to curb up this evil because they are representative of the country. Moreover, everyone should aware of the anti-social activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 366, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'followed'.
Suggestion: followed
... drinked alcohol in serial and same was follow by a 15 years old boy which causes his ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, moreover, so, still, then, while, for instance, such as, it is true, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1294.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6884057971 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46512111187 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623188405797 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.9247652326 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.4285714286 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197402005197 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625121350647 0.084324248473 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736246694763 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115023242142 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0641137039921 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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