Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? youth is not involved in decision making channels in our world.
Society today is different than in the past. Technology and other inventions made our world a very small village that now everyone is connected in it.Some people agree that youth is not involved in decision making channels in our world, while others disagree. In my perspective point, today youth are more involved than before in determining the future of the society. In the following paragraphs, I will discuss my reasons.
First, youth today held many critical positions in decision-making channels all over the world. In addition, they contribute to improving our future by merging their thoughts into the society. Such as, according to Forbes the world most popular magazine that talks about the most famous influencers all over the world, they mentioned in one of their editions that Mark Zuckberg the owner of the famous social website Facebook is the youngest influencer in the United States that held A leading position in the United Nation after his legendry website that connected people from all over the world on it. Also, he helped in educating many children in the third developing countries by adding different educational sources for them, as a result they were able to learn how to write and read over the internet without even going to school.
Second, many revolutions that happened recently in many countries especially the middle-east were by youth. For example, according to CBC international news channel the revolution that happened in Egypt, Libya, and Yemen was by youth who seek freedom and the right to stand against corrupted governments.
Third, youth contributions in scientific researchs will change the future of the society. For instance, from my personal experience while I was doing my postgraduate studies in chemistry I was required to search over the internet for different articles related to my point of research to decide what point am I going to pursue in my research I found out that most of these leading articles in chemistry and other fields were conducted by youth ranging between twenty years old to thirty years old. In addition, that I have read an article in NewYork times magazine that one of the winners of noble prize in space field was a young women who were able to invent a suit for astronomers to be able to stand on the surface of Mars planet to discover it.
Summing up, it is true that this era is different than before. Youth have done amazing contributions to our society and they still continue to do so.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, still, third, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 43.0788530466 100% => OK
Preposition: 75.0 52.1666666667 144% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2061.0 1977.66487455 104% => OK
No of words: 416.0 407.700716846 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95432692308 4.8611393121 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65707435868 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 222.0 212.727598566 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533653846154 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 639.9 618.680645161 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.6003584229 73% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 115.359650177 48.9658058833 236% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 137.4 100.406767564 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 5.45110844103 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88709677419 143% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210146787747 0.236089414692 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730538388133 0.076458572812 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0876865598883 0.0737576698707 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120627330885 0.150856017488 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087979934326 0.0645574589148 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 11.7677419355 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 10.9000537634 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 86.8835125448 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.