In a study of the reading habits of Waymarsh citizens conducted by the University of Waymarsh, most respondents said they preferred literary classics as reading material. However, a second study conducted by the same researchers found that the type of book most frequently checked out of each of the public libraries in Waymarsh was the mystery novel. Therefore, it can be concluded that the respondents in the first study had misrepresented their reading preferences.
From the two studies it has been concluded that the response from the first study has misguided the reserchers of the Waymarsh university anout the books they regularly study. But, some of the questions remains unclear from the study. Is first study on citizens are are of same age group or the same sex also it isuncleared that survey conducted on citizens are belong to reading habits or not. On other hand, researchers found that almost all public liberary contain all the mystery novels this survey does not satisfy the the second study commensly. This does not provide with strong proof of misguidance may be people like private liberaries or they like to perchase books from book store. This two uncleared questions counterws the conclusion.
Firstly, on the primary survey researchers come up with the result that people of waymarsh like to ead more about literary classics. But, it cannot be clearly justifies that study on the citrizens are of which age group, or sex also it is not clear that how many of the residents have been surveyed. Because in order to ensure that citizens like to read classic books almost all type of people should be included on the survey. May be it is possible that elderly people like to read literary classics and young generation wants to read the thrilling stories of the mysteries adittionaly people connected to the business like to read business books.
Secondly reserchers came up with the result that most public liberaries contains mystery novels and due to that they have ariieved to conclusion that people have misguided them on the survey. During this survey also some questions to be answered. May be people love to buy books not to reed form liberies. Also some citizens read through the private libereries. And as a result to this facts it would be not legimitate to blame the citizens of the waymarsah city that they have provided the wrong information about the reading habbits.
To conclude, that the researchers of the university has to provide with some more facts about the survey and without that figures and facts of the survey iot cannot be concluded that citizens have misinterpreted the resechers.
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Essay evaluation report
Sentence: From the two studies it has been concluded that the response from the first study has misguided the reserchers of the Waymarsh university anout the books they regularly study.
Error: reserchers Suggestion: researchers
Error: anout Suggestion: about
Sentence: Is first study on citizens are are of same age group or the same sex also it isuncleared that survey conducted on citizens are belong to reading habits or not.
Error: isuncleared Suggestion: uncleared
Sentence: On other hand, researchers found that almost all public liberary contain all the mystery novels this survey does not satisfy the the second study commensly.
Error: commensly Suggestion: commonly
Error: liberary Suggestion: library
Sentence: This does not provide with strong proof of misguidance may be people like private liberaries or they like to perchase books from book store.
Error: liberaries Suggestion: libraries
Error: perchase Suggestion: purchase
Sentence: This two uncleared questions counterws the conclusion.
Error: counterws Suggestion: counters
Sentence: Firstly, on the primary survey researchers come up with the result that people of waymarsh like to ead more about literary classics.
Error: ead Suggestion: No alternate word
Error: waymarsh Suggestion: warmers
Sentence: But, it cannot be clearly justifies that study on the citrizens are of which age group, or sex also it is not clear that how many of the residents have been surveyed.
Error: citrizens Suggestion: citizens
Sentence: May be it is possible that elderly people like to read literary classics and young generation wants to read the thrilling stories of the mysteries adittionaly people connected to the business like to read business books.
Error: adittionaly Suggestion: admitting
Sentence: Secondly reserchers came up with the result that most public liberaries contains mystery novels and due to that they have ariieved to conclusion that people have misguided them on the survey.
Error: ariieved Suggestion: arrived
Error: liberaries Suggestion: libraries
Error: reserchers Suggestion: researchers
Sentence: May be people love to buy books not to reed form liberies.
Error: liberies Suggestion: liberties
Sentence: Also some citizens read through the private libereries.
Error: libereries Suggestion: libraries
Sentence: And as a result to this facts it would be not legimitate to blame the citizens of the waymarsah city that they have provided the wrong information about the reading habbits.
Error: waymarsah Suggestion: warmers
Error: legimitate Suggestion: legitimate
Error: habbits Suggestion: habits
Sentence: To conclude, that the researchers of the university has to provide with some more facts about the survey and without that figures and facts of the survey iot cannot be concluded that citizens have misinterpreted the resechers.
Error: iot Suggestion: ion
Error: resechers Suggestion: rescuers
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 3.5 out of 6
Category: Satisfactory Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 16 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 366 350
No. of Characters: 1772 1500
No. of Different Words: 162 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.374 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.842 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.463 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 123 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 90 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 66 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 39 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 22.875 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.099 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.812 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.343 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.521 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.088 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 182, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...ut the books they regularly study. But, some of the questions remains unclear from the stud...
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Line 1, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: are
...m the study. Is first study on citizens are are of same age group or the same sex also ...
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Line 1, column 266, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...he study. Is first study on citizens are are of same age group or the same sex al...
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Line 1, column 364, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'belonged'.
Suggestion: belonged
...d that survey conducted on citizens are belong to reading habits or not. On other hand...
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Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...ery novels this survey does not satisfy the the second study commensly. This does not p...
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Line 1, column 522, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...ery novels this survey does not satisfy the the second study commensly. This does not p...
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Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...the conclusion. Firstly, on the primary survey researchers come up with the resu...
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Line 2, column 301, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ny of the residents have been surveyed. Because in order to ensure that citizens like t...
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Line 2, column 429, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: Maybe
...eople should be included on the survey. May be it is possible that elderly people like...
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Line 3, column 307, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
...to buy books not to reed form liberies. Also some citizens read through the private ...
^^^^
Line 3, column 382, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
... private libereries. And as a result to this facts it would be not legimitate to bla...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, as to, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.6327345309 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 11.1786427146 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 13.6137724551 118% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 28.8173652695 108% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 55.5748502994 108% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 16.3942115768 18% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1802.0 2260.96107784 80% => OK
No of words: 366.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92349726776 5.12650576532 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37391431897 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51360180495 2.78398813304 90% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 204.123752495 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.437158469945 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 560.7 705.55239521 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59920159681 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 4.96107784431 81% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 19.7664670659 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7227330341 57.8364921388 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.625 119.503703932 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.875 23.324526521 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.70786347227 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 5.15768463074 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 6.88822355289 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.67664670659 128% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245457816925 0.218282227539 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796215551531 0.0743258471296 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0736617661349 0.0701772020484 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141198631005 0.128457276422 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694321764929 0.0628817314937 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 14.3799401198 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 48.3550499002 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.1628742515 43% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.197005988 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.5979740519 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.92 8.32208582834 95% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 98.500998004 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 12.3882235529 89% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.9071856287 92% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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