Dear Mrs. Kale,
I'm Shruti your tenant. I had recently moved into your flat with my family. I would like to complain regarding the furniture in the dining area.
One of the legs of the dining table is not equivalent to other three. The table always keeps making weird noise which is very annoying. I would request to change the dining table.
As in the agreement, you had agreed to change all the old furniture with the new ones. I'm currently not satisfies with the working condition of the dining table.
I'm looking forward for your help.
Yours sincerely
Shruti
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
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Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 5.05154639175 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 32.9175257732 27% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 483.0 937.175257732 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 100.0 206.0 49% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.16227766017 3.78020617076 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.24986666272 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 64.0 127.690721649 50% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 141.3 290.88556701 49% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 10.0 16.3608247423 61% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.1431049297 44.8134815571 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 48.3 76.5299724578 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 10.0 16.8248392259 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 1.5 4.34317383033 35% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171535387153 0.216113520407 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0612810809137 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586705905307 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968776325073 0.12726935374 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0671504988225 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.3 8.37731958763 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.25 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 7.45979381443 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.25 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.76 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.0 8.62886597938 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.0 8.54432989691 70% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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