In this rampant age of globalization, various kinds of cultures are emerging. Each area has its own tradition. People are independent to adapt any tradition, consequently, a rapid change is found into the cultures. Therefore, I am completely agree with the statement and I do believe that the development of culture has both the positive and the negative effects. These are demonstrated below in this essay.
It is quite normal that the human beings are keen to accept the development and to find new ideas. However, they can spontaneously involve into the new trends. The trends can easily travel through the visitors from one country to another. For instance we can compare the latest garment styles and eating habits with the ancient times. Pros as well as the cons can be seen by cause of this concoction of trends.
At this point, for an illustration, I can do the comparison between previous Indian culture and the present fashion. Previous tradition of India was to wear full covered clothes but presently the countrymen are familiar with the western dresses. As a consequence, traditional dresses are being evaporated.
On the other hand, terrible customs like dowry system, which was the social stigma, is demolished by the young generation. This reduces the rate of suicides and homicides within newly married families. This is an example of good effects.
To put it on nutshell, I would like to state that it is definitely true that culture varies in many ways as compared with the past years. This modification into the traditions and customs influences the benefits as well as the drawbacks on the human lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, so, therefore, well, as to, for instance, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1369.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05166051661 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79949070136 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619926199262 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1254041716 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0555555556 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0555555556 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72222222222 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 3.4128256513 293% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166399112392 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0420012464727 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0710252055186 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0836118508065 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.061490530569 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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