Some people think that in this modern world, getting old is entirely bad. However, other people believe that the life of old people is much better now than it was in the past.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Becoming old has been a common phenomenon for every living species. Nowadays, some people explain that getting old age would be difficult crisis in their mind while, others believe that aged life would be an enjoyable life when considering past. Anyhow, in my point of view, life of elderly people become worse than before by the fact of single child, increasing number of divorce and industrialization.
On the other hand, old age people are suffering detrimental effect in innovative world by physically, emotionally, and socially, thereby people are afraid to being old because retirement psychosis, fear of being isolated, livelihood instability and so on. In other words, elder people especially employers often think that they could not do anything after the service duration, lack of money for daily lives, separation anxiety and aged disease, so reason may pull them back to accept their geriatric period. For instance, escalating old age home represents, the problem inside each family and society after being old.
On the one hand, elder people would be an asset of every family and society to seek advice from prolonged life experience, and care givers for the new generations. Family size inhibited than past years such as, single child agenda, distant job opportunities makes many family to be with their elderly parents to help their grand children, motivate their age over, most probably as a support and care giver. Although inflation would be a big problem, many people have a good job and salaries which would help aged parents to be in home and do some household works inside the house itself. Moreover, government have many programs for geriatric person in terms of pension, medical and travel allowance and so on.
However, in my perspective, being old as an indispensable phenomenon so that accept the pro's an con's then behave as a good grant parents and supporters to the family and society would be a best for elder people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ters to the family and society would be a best for elder people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, moreover, so, then, while, for instance, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1636.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09657320872 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66503574898 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582554517134 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 58.5444663948 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.727272727 106.682146367 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1818181818 20.7667163134 141% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.18181818182 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.209460258457 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0897468459351 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0646425117869 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141141574964 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0840751057781 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.89 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.96 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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