Reading and lecture are debating whether or not a four-day workweek would be beneficial for all the parts involved, namely the company, the employees and the whole economy. The writer involves the numerous advantages on four-day workweek but the lecture fascinating ample points to claim on four workweek points and give buttress point for five-day workweek in terms of profit, errors etc.
First of all, the writer says that employees make less error because they feel fresh and company do not require to pay more to employees and get profit. On the other hand, the lecture says that if employees work four-day workweek then they have require to hire more people which increase the cost of computer, space and also training is required to train new employees and their medical facilities which increase company cost instead Of profit.
To continue, the write says that unemployment is reduced by this but on the other hand the lecture opine that if company provide four-day workweek then company expect from the employees efficiency of work same as in the five-day workweek hence no employees hire because it enhance the cost of company and reduce the profit and finally unemployment is same as that as before.
Furthermore, The writer says that in four workweek employees have leisure time to spend with family, have more regions to work with full efficiency and make less error. In contrast the lecture provide ample point to support five work week that if employees work only four days they do not have opportunity to get promote and if there is any error occur they also have risk to lose the job first rather than five-day work employees.
In brief, there is no ample benefit provided to support the four-day workweek hence, five-day workweek is better in terms of company, the employees and the whole economy.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 34, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
Reading and lecture are debating whether or not a four-day workweek would be beneficial...
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Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'paying'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: paying
...y feel fresh and company do not require to pay more to employees and get profit. On th...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'required'.
Suggestion: required
...s work four-day workweek then they have require to hire more people which increase the ...
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Line 3, column 254, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'hiring'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'require' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: hiring
...our-day workweek then they have require to hire more people which increase the cost of ...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...cost instead Of profit. To continue, the write says that unemployment is reduced by th...
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Line 5, column 177, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...y workweek then company expect from the employees efficiency of work same as in the five-...
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Line 5, column 274, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'enhances'?
Suggestion: enhances
...week hence no employees hire because it enhance the cost of company and reduce the prof...
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Line 7, column 173, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: contrast,
...full efficiency and make less error. In contrast the lecture provide ample point to supp...
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Line 7, column 235, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...rovide ample point to support five work week that if employees work only four days t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, hence, if, so, then, in brief, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 10.4613686534 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 5.04856512141 20% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 7.30242825607 205% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 22.412803532 62% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 30.3222958057 112% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1373.03311258 111% => OK
No of words: 306.0 270.72406181 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97712418301 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.04702891845 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39775987628 2.5805825403 93% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 145.348785872 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.457516339869 0.540411800872 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 466.2 419.366225166 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 2.5761589404 155% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 13.0662251656 61% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 21.2450331126 179% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.8147263608 49.2860985944 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 190.375 110.228320801 173% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.25 21.698381199 176% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.375 7.06452816374 203% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 4.19205298013 215% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 4.33554083885 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.27373068433 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.47126740474 0.272083759551 173% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.233148091009 0.0996497079465 234% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0449368117178 0.0662205650399 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.273497789101 0.162205337803 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388040660363 0.0443174109184 88% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.2 13.3589403974 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.37 53.8541721854 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 11.0289183223 153% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.2 12.2367328918 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 63.6247240618 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.498013245 164% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 11.2008830022 152% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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