It is no secret that students get influenced by their teachers not only about issues that are related to studying but also in the different field of topics like politic. While most of the people firmly believe that teachers should not reveal their social or political views in the classroom, I exactly hold the opposite perspective. There are several reasons for my point of view, the most salient ones of which will be explained below.
First, the social and political manner needs to be learned therefore they should be taught at school by teachers. Students probably do not have enough knowledge about this kind of issues. Besides they are the next generation of the society so they should learn in the best and organized way. while teachers talk about these the student can take part and argue about their own beliefs and it learn them how to state their own attitude and have strong reasons for it to convince the others. For instance, I really do not know enough about politics and society as my teachers barely talk about them even sometimes I confuse that how to learn and know them.
Second, in the modern era announcing beliefs about political and social should not be prohibited for anyone especially teachers due to freedom that the human being always has been concerned about. Every person should have the right to talk about believes and share them with others even they probably figure out that they are wrong so they can enhance their social and political knowledge in a logical approach.
To conclude, I think that it is far better, that teachers not only should have right to state their politic and social believes but also teach their student how to find their own beliefs and recognize their ways. If I were a teacher, I definitely talk about these kinds of topics to my student and make them be aware of the politic situation in society, as a result, the future generation will be more conscious.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, really, second, so, therefore, while, even so, for instance, i think, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 15.1003584229 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 44.0 43.0788530466 102% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 52.1666666667 84% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1596.0 1977.66487455 81% => OK
No of words: 334.0 407.700716846 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.77844311377 4.8611393121 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27500489853 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.30127169429 2.67179642975 86% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.497005988024 0.524837075471 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 492.3 618.680645161 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 3.51792114695 114% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.1344086022 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 46.6267686587 48.9658058833 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.0 100.406767564 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8333333333 20.6045352989 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0833333333 5.45110844103 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 11.8709677419 59% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.88709677419 61% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201740229645 0.236089414692 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0864135729516 0.076458572812 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452277259794 0.0737576698707 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145160368834 0.150856017488 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0313099255116 0.0645574589148 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 11.7677419355 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 58.1214874552 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.1575268817 124% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.74 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.01818996416 102% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 86.8835125448 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.0537634409 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.5 Out of 30
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