Dear Igor,
I am elated to be writing to you. I must appreciate the commendable services that you had given to us. We are very happy with how the pictures turned out at my sister’s wedding. Allow me to elaborate.
I was happy to see the pictures when they were delivered to us last week. I will be honest to tell you that when we had decided to hire you for the task, we were not expecting the services to turn out to be this good. However, we have been impressed by the services and have also referred our friends to use your services for upcoming events in their families.
I am sure that during the coverage of all the functions you must have overheard us talking about the upcoming marriage reception which the family is hosting for the friends and families who could not make it to the wedding. I am delighted to share with you that my family has been impressed with the pictures and we would not like to waste any more time and book you for the said event as well. It would be our pleasure if you will cover the marriage reception as well after exhibiting your phenomenal services in the past. The event will be on 29 August 2018, please keep your commitment towards us.
I am looking forward to seeing you a day prior to our house. We will make all the necessary arrangements as you had done during the coverage of the wedding.
Yours faithfully,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Igor, I am elated to be writing to you. I must...
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Line 11, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ge of the wedding. Yours faithfully, Brad Jason
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, so, well, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.48453608247 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 46.0 32.9175257732 140% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1132.0 937.175257732 121% => OK
No of words: 255.0 206.0 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.43921568627 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 3.78020617076 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42069127553 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537254901961 0.622605031667 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 356.4 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 55.0174833066 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.8571428571 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2142857143 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 4.34317383033 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218096574714 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0779391572055 0.0766984524023 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.049245328903 0.0603063233224 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128580024622 0.12726935374 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0597942611569 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.47 8.71597938144 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.82 7.59969072165 90% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 41.2886597938 90% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.