There is no doubt that teaching activity has been respected and has it's values all over the decades regardless of any culture or issue. The teacher was regarded as the segment in the base of knowledge and the progress. However, the vision towards the value of teacher has been declined recently. Someone can consciously weigh the pros and cons of each side. The explanations is going to be as follow.
First of all, the recent circumstances have been changed at the modern wold. The modernity caused elimination of many ethics toward the recent generation. The kids and youngsters have not any idea about the respect and the appreciated of people how have a massive role in our live. For instance, our ancestors was learned how to respect your teacher because he is the maker of your future.
Furthermore, the teachers have been replaced by the new technology. The spread of electronic devices between the youngsters and kids make them forget the role of teacher. When they need any information or search for the meaning of words, they just switch on the internet and write the keywords of their topic in the google search. Personally, I think that is the most dangerous issue as this neglected the role of teacher.
Moreover, the governments now regarded all it's efforts and appreciation toward the political men, police men and army men. I think that is because of the previous wars evident. Also, they regarded that the teaching process of teacher is in the secondary stage. However, in the last the teacher was regarded in the highest class stage. They gives salary according to the necessary of the profession. For example, they regarded the doctors are more important than teachers, also do the engineering.
Finally, the governments have a second rule in fragile the role or the vision to the teacher. For example, in the last years, the governments was sent the teachers overseas to the progressive countries to take experience and learn new techniques helped them in improving their way in education process. But unfortunately, all these grants are pull from them.
To sum up, due to the aforementioned reasons. all bulk should keep in mind that the role and respect of the teacher is going towards the edge of the abyss. That issue will lead to break the back bone of knowledge and ethics and for sure the future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 376, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[4]
Message: You should probably use: 'are'.
Suggestion: are
...and cons of each side. The explanations is going to be as follow. First of all...
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Line 1, column 391, Rule ID: AS_FOLLOW[1]
Message: Did you mean 'as follows'?
Suggestion: as follows
...h side. The explanations is going to be as follow. First of all, the recent circumsta...
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Line 7, column 341, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'They' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'give'
Suggestion: give
...garded in the highest class stage. They gives salary according to the necessary of th...
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Line 9, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...last years, the governments was sent the teachers overseas to the progressive cou...
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Line 11, column 47, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
... up, due to the aforementioned reasons. all bulk should keep in mind that the role ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, however, moreover, second, so, as to, for example, for instance, i think, no doubt, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 15.1003584229 119% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 13.8261648746 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 52.1666666667 94% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1942.0 1977.66487455 98% => OK
No of words: 397.0 407.700716846 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89168765743 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65620442774 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 212.727598566 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.521410579345 0.524837075471 99% => OK
syllable_count: 591.3 618.680645161 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 11.0 3.08781362007 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 20.6003584229 121% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.1344086022 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.8933598362 48.9658058833 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.68 100.406767564 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.88 20.6045352989 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.5376344086 90% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.88709677419 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.120075327552 0.236089414692 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0326996836499 0.076458572812 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.029952740036 0.0737576698707 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0587367498028 0.150856017488 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.029663639387 0.0645574589148 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 11.7677419355 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 58.1214874552 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.1575268817 79% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 10.9000537634 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.84 8.01818996416 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 86.8835125448 100% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 10.002688172 60% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.0537634409 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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