You are due to move into a rented apartment next month but you will not be able to because you have some problems.
Write a letter to the course provider. In your letter,
Explain your situation
Describe your problems
Tell him/her when you think you can move in
Dear Sam,
Hope this letter finds you in good health. I am writing this letter to you regarding our tenancy contract finalized a week earlier. According to the contract i have to move into you house 10 days from now. I regret to inform you i would not be able to move as of now due some unforeseen and unavoidable circumstances.
As you are aware the shifting is a hefty process and it takes a lot of commuting from previous residence to new place. Well, unfortunately, my car has been stolen two days back and at the moment i do not have any conveyance with me, which puts me in to an absurd situation. Furthermore, my current landlord has requested me to extend my stay at his residence for another month as he has failed to manage another tenant. He lives abroad and is coming in a week's time to settle my current tenancy terms with him.
Due to all aforementioned obvious reason, i am afraid i would not be able to shift at your place at the given date. However, in order to compensate and sort out this situation i am ready to pay half month rent. Please acknowledge if you agree. Additionally, by the 10th of next month i will move at your residence. We can make amendments in our tenancy contract as per your consent to my offer.
Kind Regards,
Lizy
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sam, Hope this letter finds you in good healt...
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Line 2, column 230, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...0 days from now. I regret to inform you i would not be able to move as of now due...
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Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... stolen two days back and at the moment i do not have any conveyance with me, whi...
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Line 3, column 454, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a week' or simply 'weeks'?
Suggestion: a week; weeks
...enant. He lives abroad and is coming in a weeks time to settle my current tenancy terms...
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Line 4, column 43, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...e to all aforementioned obvious reason, i am afraid i would not be able to shift ...
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Line 4, column 55, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...rementioned obvious reason, i am afraid i would not be able to shift at your plac...
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Line 4, column 177, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... compensate and sort out this situation i am ready to pay half month rent. Please...
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Line 4, column 285, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...Additionally, by the 10th of next month i will move at your residence. We can mak...
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Line 5, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...our consent to my offer. Kind Regards, Lizy
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Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ent to my offer. Kind Regards, Lizy
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, regarding, so, well, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 26.3917525773 136% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 234.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.40598290598 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67271735747 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 127.690721649 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.619658119658 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 329.4 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0363858597 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.6428571429 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.322289456236 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109120609709 0.0766984524023 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0832877772996 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.220115610643 0.12726935374 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.123432429287 0.0580467560999 213% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 7.59969072165 100% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.