The reading and listenning both discuss about the painting which is name Portait of an Elderly Woman in a White Bonnet is painted or didn't painted by Rembrandt. The reading states that there are some doubts about the painting is painted by Rembrandt and brings up three reasons. The lecturer agrees with the statement and supports each of the reasons.
First of all, the reading states that in the painting, there is some problems about the woman's dress. Moreover, the lecturer add some other important doubts about dress. She states that there is some problem on colours of the dress. That's why it could not belong to Rembrandt.
Another point reading explains that light and shadow in the painting don't fit together. The lecturer agrees this position by saying that light and shadow expected to very realistic. By contrast, according to lecturer, there could not be a such inquality in this painting.
Finally, the reading claims that the back of painting shows that it was made on a panel made of several pieces of wood glued together but there is not know painting that Rembrandt uses a panel glued together in this way with pieces of wood. Nevertheless, the professor states that wood panel enlarges the painting and makes grand or valuable.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 134, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: didn't
...y Woman in a White Bonnet is painted or didnt painted by Rembrandt. The reading state...
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Line 1, column 280, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... Rembrandt and brings up three reasons. The lecturer agrees with the statement and ...
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Line 3, column 56, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are some problems'?
Suggestion: there are some problems
...he reading states that in the painting, there is some problems about the womans dress. Moreover, the l...
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Line 3, column 234, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...s some problem on colours of the dress. Thats why it could not belong to Rembrandt. ...
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Line 5, column 70, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...s that light and shadow in the painting dont fit together. The lecturer agrees this ...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'known'.
Suggestion: known
...of wood glued together but there is not know painting that Rembrandt uses a panel gl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, moreover, nevertheless, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 7.30242825607 123% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 12.0772626932 83% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 22.412803532 67% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 30.3222958057 106% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1044.0 1373.03311258 76% => OK
No of words: 212.0 270.72406181 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92452830189 5.08290768461 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 4.04702891845 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37548593519 2.5805825403 92% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 145.348785872 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.504716981132 0.540411800872 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 297.9 419.366225166 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.55342163355 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.25165562914 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 13.0662251656 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 50.2582221023 49.2860985944 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6666666667 21.698381199 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.08333333333 7.06452816374 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 4.19205298013 143% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 4.33554083885 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 4.45695364238 112% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.27373068433 94% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254779435837 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0922705519364 0.0996497079465 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0923875053302 0.0662205650399 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146410219343 0.162205337803 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0912954406933 0.0443174109184 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.3589403974 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 53.8541721854 132% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.0289183223 69% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.2367328918 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.53 8.42419426049 89% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 63.6247240618 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 63.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 19.0 Out of 30
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