The diagram below shows the production of electricity using a system called ocean thermal energy conservation.
The pictorial layout illustrates which steps involved for the perducing of electricity and the temperature of surface sea water is 29 degree Celsius while 5 degree celsius noticed by the deep sea water.
To begin with the first three main systems are for the electricity process namely, an evacuated evaporation chamber,turbine and condensing chamber. Firstly, the solar energy of the sun heats up the surface water on near around less than a third degree celsius then this warm water handed over into the an evacuated evaporation chamber where it boils.
The further description is that, as it boiled salt deposit and water vapour is generated. Next step involved, vapour water is going through the turbine and it utilised for the production of electric charge.After it powers the turbine is handed over the condensing chamber while this water cooled by the depth of ocean. Finally, that water which is vapoured using for drinking water. Meanwhile, waste water is discharged into the ocean and process repeated again.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 116, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , turbine
...namely, an evacuated evaporation chamber,turbine and condensing chamber. Firstly, the so...
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Line 2, column 299, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'an' is left.
Suggestion: the; an
...s then this warm water handed over into the an evacuated evaporation chamber where it ...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: After
...d for the production of electric charge.After it powers the turbine is handed over th...
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Line 3, column 206, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...d for the production of electric charge.After it powers the turbine is handed over th...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: REPEAT_AGAIN[1]
Message: Use simply 'repeated'.
Suggestion: repeated
...s discharged into the ocean and process repeated again.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, so, then, third, while, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 856.0 965.302439024 89% => OK
No of words: 165.0 196.424390244 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18787878788 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.58402463422 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6839385557 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.7960742306 43.030603864 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.285714286 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5714285714 22.9334400587 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.85714285714 5.23603664747 169% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0896799404806 0.215688989381 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0448067202043 0.103423049105 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0273860137882 0.0843802449381 32% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575934214634 0.15604864568 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0234523147587 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.2329268293 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 61.2550243902 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.8 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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