The difference in age between parents and their children has increased compared to the past. Do you think the advantages of this trend outweigh the disadvantages?
The large age gap between children and their parents has increased recently. It appears that this trend can have damaging impacts on both children and their parents. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, in this situation, children and their parents often have varying attitudes towards life. This is because they come from two different generations. For example, parents who are about 30 years older than their children usually believe that their family is the most important priority in their life while their children think that the popularity among their peers is more significant and they tend to spend more time with their friends. In addition, a second and perhaps most drawback of the difference in age is to decrease the connection between family members since they have no common interests. In other words, they have completely different tastes in clothing, lifestyle, and also habits. In terms of clothing, for instance, children usually would like wearing some weird clothes such as the baggy ones with bright colors which may be unacceptable for their seniors. Thus, children and their parents always are put in a challenge which is caused by the generation gap.
It is true that very young parents who decide to have a child usually are inexperienced. Therefore, their children would not be totally safe in this type of family in terms of an appropriate nurture. Despite this, a long age gap can weaken the strong bonding between family members that would lead to a lot of abnormal behavior in households.
To conclude, although this trend could have negative consequences, it is occurring in a multitude of families in the modern world. It seems to me that if this trend is continued, it will be observed how the families will be in a serious trouble over time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 702, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
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Line 3, column 747, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'usually' is usually put between 'would' and 'like'.
Suggestion: would usually like
...rms of clothing, for instance, children usually would like wearing some weird clothes such as the ...
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Line 3, column 913, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[4]
Message: The adverb 'always' is usually put after the verb 'are'.
Suggestion: are always
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, so, therefore, thus, while, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5807004841 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561872909699 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.8937724534 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6666666667 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.9333333333 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.313481376169 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112574940436 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0738602209479 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19952652982 0.151304729494 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0919125573712 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.85 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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