Friendship is a relation that a person makes by his choice and not something that he is bound by due to their blood relations. Friends are very necessary and advantageous for persons to live and enjoy their lives the most. Today's world demands a person to be as social as possible for his/her growth both professionally and personally. Although, it is important for a person to bond with as many people as possible, it is actually more important to keep friendship with old friends.
Every relation goes through highs and lows which tests the nature of the relation from time to time. And, this is where the old friendship proves very beneficial to the new one as it has gone through the test of time. I want to quote one example here from my personal life. I met a person thirteen years back on first day of my college. We interacted and became friends. The two of us had a great rapport through four years of our college life and were the best buddies. Since, we were in the same course and were roommates in the hostel, we used to be together all time. He still is my best friend in spite of the fact that we are in different cities and do not interact very much. We know that we are always available for each other in our highs and lows. I believe that the same may not happen with a new friend till we spend such time that the the relation becomes old.
Besides this, old friends are normally the people who know us very well and thus are the best judges of us. And, because of this they are the quintessential for a person to improve and do best in his/her life. Since, old friends know our strengths and weaknesses the most, they are our best teacher, critics, admirers and advisers.
These are the reasons I feel that we should not leave our old friends at the cost of giving more time to new ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 845, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: the
...new friend till we spend such time that the the relation becomes old. Besides this,...
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Line 3, column 845, Rule ID: DT_DT[1]
Message: Maybe you need to remove one determiner so that only 'the' or 'the' is left.
Suggestion: the; the
...new friend till we spend such time that the the relation becomes old. Besides this,...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, first, if, may, so, still, thus, well, i feel, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 15.1003584229 126% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 9.8082437276 20% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 13.8261648746 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.0286738351 91% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 43.0788530466 111% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 52.1666666667 77% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1977.66487455 75% => OK
No of words: 338.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37278106509 4.8611393121 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3405041028 2.67179642975 88% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502958579882 0.524837075471 96% => OK
syllable_count: 453.6 618.680645161 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.51630824373 86% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.59856630824 135% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.94265232975 40% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.6003584229 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 26.7219334704 48.9658058833 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.1111111111 100.406767564 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7777777778 20.6045352989 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.27777777778 5.45110844103 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140034656574 0.236089414692 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0463257893385 0.076458572812 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.052249954239 0.0737576698707 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963380956592 0.150856017488 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.028776815441 0.0645574589148 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 11.7677419355 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 58.1214874552 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.1575268817 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.07 10.9000537634 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 8.01818996416 82% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 86.8835125448 49% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.247311828 68% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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