The diagram illustrates the stages in the life of a honey bee. Overall, it is clear that the complete life cycle lasts between 34 and 36 days. There are five main stages, beginning with laying eggs and ending with mature adult insect.
The first stage of the process is that the female adult lays eggs every three days. At the next stage, the eggs are hatched after nine to ten days, nymph appears depending on the readiness of the egg.
During the third stage of the life cycle, the eggs are first waited for five days, the baby bee is born. Until seven days to nine days, when nymph moults three times during its growth. After a total of 30 to 31 days from the start of the cycle, a young adult is emerged, then up to four days for it to become mature enough to be grown into a grown-up bee.
- The table and pie chart shows the number of research students in Australian universities in 2001 and 2010.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words. 78
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 67
- The table below shows the sales at a small restaurant in a downtown business district.Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 78
- Children today are too dependent on computersand electronic entertainment. It would be better toencourage them to spend more time outsideplaying sports and games. Do you agree ordisagree with this statement? Give your opinion. 78
- As compared to the past children these days spend more of their leisure time indoors with computers and TV and less time outdoors Describe some of the problems this lack of outdoor leisure time can cause and suggest at least one possible solution 65
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, then, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 965.302439024 67% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.27631578947 4.92477711251 87% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 1.84473496509 2.65546596893 69% => OK
Unique words: 90.0 106.607317073 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592105263158 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 194.4 283.868780488 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.2969647091 43.030603864 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.25 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 5.23603664747 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172469508034 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102271279091 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.161776071828 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12885000077 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.12904432266 0.0819641961636 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.2 13.2329268293 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 61.2550243902 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 11.4140731707 66% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.28 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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