These days' children are surrounded by electronic devices such as personal
computers, tablet computers, and smart phones, and they learn to use them at
a very early age.
What are the advantages and disadvantages of this situation?
Give reasons for your answer, and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.
Write at least 250 words.
Role of electronic devices has been crucial in everyone's life. Almost everything we do involves computer in one way or another, so of course children are exposed to electronic devices from the day they are born. This essay will discuss both positive and negative aspects of this situation.
Most families have at least one desktop or laptop computer at home, and they often have tablet computer and smart phones as well. This means even babies are accustomed to seeing these devices and watching how to use them. This exposure do have some benefits in children growth. Introduction to technology, in early age, broadens children horizons. For one thing, various convolution problems can be solved by using electronic devices, which spur children for facing challenges. It impetus learning too.
On the other hand, there are disadvantages when children have too much exposure to electronic devices.For instances, if children are addicted to electronic devices, they will not have social life. Children may find comfort in artificial world. Moreover, it can hamper children intellectual and creative development. If children depend on computer to solve problems, then they don't learn to rely on themselves. In addition, if children use most of their time on electronic devices, then they do not get any physical exercises, which may lead to serious health problems.
To sum up, we all rely on electronic devices and it is important for children to know how to use it. It is also important, however, for children to know how to do other things and to have other kinds of experience as well. Parents need to make sure children have balance of different kind of activities in their lives
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, moreover, so, then, well, at least, for instance, in addition, kind of, of course, for one thing, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1415.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1083032491 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73421318675 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.1034805393 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.2352941176 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2941176471 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.82352941176 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.255640149974 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836188816793 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383968098248 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15912657367 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428776147201 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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