What are the benefits of living in big cities, as opposed to rural areas? What are the problems of rural areas and how can they be solved?
There are more benefits of living in the big cities compared to the living in the rural area has created a chaos in the country. Some people opine that the city is better for the living while some are in against of the stance. However, I firmly believe that the city is more convenient for the living. In this essay, I am going to deliver both sides before jumping to the conclusion.
There are myriad of motives for living in the city but the top benefits are like the transportation, employment, medical facilities, and education. In addition, people can leave with the full independence and without any disruptions. Moreover, apart from the above, one can enjoy the all the government's benefits as well as other showbiz which are quite necessary for today.
However, there are also negative points co-exist with the above positive points. Firstly, people in the rural area are not enjoying liberty and even not allows others to appreciate. Secondly, in terms of focal conveniences, rural area is generally needing in that. For instance, as per the recent news of the trusted resources, there were many people transported from rural area to the city for curing of a hyperactive disease called dengue owing to lack of the medical equipment & facilities of requiring technology.
To sum up, the aforementioned discussion, one can reach the conclusion, the city area is a better for the living as it is developing with the time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 236, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...terms of focal conveniences, rural area is generally needing in that. For instance, as per the recen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, in addition, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 6.10837438424 49% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 8.36945812808 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 20.9802955665 33% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 31.9359605911 116% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1190.0 1207.87684729 99% => OK
No of words: 242.0 242.827586207 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9173553719 5.00649968141 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 3.92707691288 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75809211098 2.71678728327 102% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 139.433497537 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553719008264 0.580463131201 95% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 379.143842365 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.6157635468 43% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6551724138 95% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.5024630542 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4082035059 50.4703680194 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.1666666667 104.977214359 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1666666667 20.9669160288 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.25397266985 162% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.33497536946 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 6.9802955665 100% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.216938922457 0.242375264174 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0839552707341 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862647155118 0.071462118173 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131525682914 0.151781067708 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0338522235164 0.0609392437508 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 12.6369458128 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.1260098522 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.9458128079 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 11.5310837438 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.74 8.32886699507 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 55.0591133005 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.94827586207 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.3980295567 96% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 76.5 Out of 90
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