What do you see as the main advantages and disadvantages of undertaking studies in a foreign country?
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Although such topics, in all
likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive dialogue on
whether undertaking studies in a foreign country can lead to thought-provoking
discussion. My view is that irrespective of the numerous arguments that exist
on either side, a person can learn many things such as a foreign language, rituals,
and many more things while studying in a foreign country. In this essay, I
shall present my point of view and calculation. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">There are a number of reasons in
favor of my viewpoint. One of them is that a person cannot only learn the
rituals, customs, but he can also learn the language of the country, so there
is automatically change in his personality and attitude. It can also be observed that while studying
abroad, he needs to earn the money for his daily expenses, and for paying the
fees of his college, so in this way he became independent. Thus, the benefits
of studying abroad are rightly justified. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">As there are two sides of every
coin, in the same way, there are also the negative points of studying in
abroad. Firstly, the children are in another
country, and there is no one who can look over them, so there may be chances
that they may start consuming liquor, drugs, and other harmful things instead
of studying due to which they may lose their main focus. Thus, the negative
points of studying abroad are truly justified. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Thus, from the above points, we
can reach the conclusion that studying abroad is good for the overall
personality development of a person, but not at the cost of his health. <o:p></o:p></p>
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 13, Rule ID: ADVERB_WORD_ORDER[10]
Message: The adverb 'never' is usually put between 'will' and 'yield'.
Suggestion: will never yield
...though such topics, in all likelihood, never will yield a consensual agreement, a constructive ...
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Line 24, column 46, Rule ID: MAIN_FOCUS[1]
Message: Use simply 'focus'.
Suggestion: focus
...udying due to which they may lose their main focus. Thus, the negative points of studying...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, look, may, so, thus, while, such as, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 6.10837438424 196% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 20.9802955665 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 31.9359605911 103% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.75862068966 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1207.87684729 140% => OK
No of words: 283.0 242.827586207 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.97879858657 5.00649968141 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 5.92165003548 2.71678728327 218% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 153.0 139.433497537 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.540636042403 0.580463131201 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 379.143842365 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 5.0 1.56157635468 320% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 0.931034482759 644% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.65517241379 192% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6551724138 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 31.0 20.5024630542 151% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 136.169647277 50.4703680194 270% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 188.0 104.977214359 179% => OK
Words per sentence: 31.4444444444 20.9669160288 150% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.22222222222 7.25397266985 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.12807881773 581% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 2.91625615764 69% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.088931866322 0.242375264174 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467200718736 0.0925447433944 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0359899440124 0.071462118173 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0349137517041 0.151781067708 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0585365650053 0.0609392437508 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.5 12.6369458128 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.55 53.1260098522 59% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.6 10.9458128079 152% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.0 11.5310837438 156% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.32886699507 100% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 55.0591133005 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.94827586207 121% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.4 10.3980295567 138% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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