some people say that people should encourage their children to take part in organized group activities in their free time. Others say that it is important for children to learn how to occupy themselves on their own.
Discuss both the views and give your opinion.
Every individual pupil wants to learn in a distinguishing manner, but a majority of people have a thorough process that children guidance should motivate their offsprings to participate in organized group activities in leisure time. Conversely, others believe that children should spend their time alone understanding oneself. In my opinion, social interaction helps in developing student character.
Although, parents should share their own experiences of an epoch of school. Which will encourage their child to get involved in institute curricular activities. To illustrate, renowned cricket star Sachine Tandulkar was an astonishing player, thus as a result, his son got selected in Indian under 19 cricket team.
Moreover, kids’ involvement in structured activity leads them to build a remarkable social inferiority complex. A person can take significant decisions at the tough time and would be a boon to his future professional life.
On the other hand, some educationist thinks that young one should concentrate to be an alone thinker. Which will abstain them to indulge in social evils like drugs, abusing and to be on the path of being a thief? For instance, bad accompany can be the reason for the inexplicable behavior.
To sum up, school authorities should reform the syllabus by adding unisex group activities as a compulsory subject with commercial novels in the library mainly focuses on the noteworthy real inspirational events.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 39, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a distinguishing manner" with adverb for "distinguishing"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
Every individual pupil wants to learn in a distinguishing manner, but a majority of people have a thorou...
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ps in developing student character. Although, parents should share their own experie...
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Line 3, column 77, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... own experiences of an epoch of school. Which will encourage their child to get invol...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e noteworthy real inspirational events.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, if, moreover, so, thus, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 224.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53571428571 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05277506324 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.696428571429 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 384.3 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7945207019 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6666666667 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245218835679 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796898330496 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0833142608252 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110441407765 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935424530966 0.056905535591 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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