Teaching something to someone is rough road for most of the people also learning someting from someone is depends on who is teaching.Depending on personel experience, personel type or emotional concern, we find that, some people learn better from those at their own level, meanwhile others learn better from those at a higher level.From my point of view, I disagree the statement that people learn better from those at their own level rather than from those at a highter level.My arguments on this statement are listed as follows.
One of the primary reason is that experience is very significant for teaching.To illustrate this point, I want to refer to my real life experience when I was at university.I had a term project for my system simulation course and had a group for this project.In the beginning of our project, I had some questions about on my duty of the group project.Then, I had asked them to another group students of my project who were at my same level and had never solved any of my questions because similiarly to me, they had seen these questions in first time of their life.However, when I had asked same questions to my professor,he solved my questions and tought me very smart way.In that time, I had observed that he solved my questions before many times because another student like me had asked him as like me.Therefore, this is a prove that experience is very important when you learning something.
Another reason why I disagree with the above statement is that perspective of people.It is a very important point that teaching someone requires to looking from their their perspective instead of just looking your own perspective.For example, according to my mathematics professors from my engineering department at Dogus University, differential equations can be teached only when teacher teached them by looking students perspective to understand which ways students could understand some mathematical equations with easy ways.Hence, it is crucial that teaching methods can be understand only looking of others perspective.
In a word,perspective of people and experiences are very significant for teaching and allow to learn easy.Taking account of all these points, we may reach the point that
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 15.1003584229 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 9.8082437276 41% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 13.8261648746 43% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 11.0286738351 154% => OK
Pronoun: 64.0 43.0788530466 149% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1872.0 1977.66487455 95% => OK
No of words: 364.0 407.700716846 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0517662725 2.67179642975 114% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 212.727598566 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.486263736264 0.524837075471 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 577.8 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.59856630824 146% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 20.6003584229 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 91.0 20.1344086022 452% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 259.538532785 48.9658058833 530% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 468.0 100.406767564 466% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 91.0 20.6045352989 442% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 20.75 5.45110844103 381% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 23.0 5.5376344086 415% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 11.8709677419 34% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274724591695 0.236089414692 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.178254964237 0.076458572812 233% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.20057190444 0.0737576698707 272% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178254964237 0.150856017488 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.20057190444 0.0645574589148 311% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.3 11.7677419355 410% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -20.89 58.1214874552 -36% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 6.10430107527 239% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 38.8 10.1575268817 382% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.72 10.9000537634 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.27 8.01818996416 141% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 86.8835125448 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 10.002688172 270% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 38.4 10.0537634409 382% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 39.0 10.247311828 381% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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