The base of any relationship is trust like relationship with friends, family, spouse. Most People think that always telling the truth shattered the relationship and on the other hand, most people think that telling the truth make stronger the relationship. According to my consideration telling the truth is most important in any relationship for the long term. The point to support my opinion are as follows:
In the begining, trust is most important because it is the base of any relationship. Trust between two people give strength to share any wrong thing that he did or happpen with him. For instance, In newly married Couple if they trust each other and any one of them did any wrong thing or if somthing wrong happen with them, then on the base of trust they can share their problem with each other and build strong relationship.
Secondly, if we have tell truth each other than we do not have any fear in our mind. For example, If we do not trust each other and lie to our spouse then we always create more lies to hidden one lie and we always have fear in our mind that what would happen if he caught lie and if we have strong trustworthy relationship then we do not need to tell lie and live free life without fear.
Furthermore, trust in relationship always gives you better life. you can rely on other person if he tells truth. Trust in any relationship make bond between them stronger.
Finally, always telling truth is far better then telling a lie. It intensify bond between people and make more stroger. By these they can share anything with each other.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 22, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'told'.
Suggestion: told
...g relationship. Secondly, if we have tell truth each other than we do not have an...
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Line 5, column 389, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ll lie and live free life without fear. Furthermore, trust in relationship alway...
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Line 7, column 66, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...ationship always gives you better life. you can rely on other person if he tells tr...
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Line 9, column 38, Rule ID: COMPARISONS_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'better than'?
Suggestion: better than
... Finally, always telling truth is far better then telling a lie. It intensify bond betwee...
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Line 9, column 45, Rule ID: COMP_THAN[3]
Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
...lly, always telling truth is far better then telling a lie. It intensify bond betwee...
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Line 9, column 68, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'intensifies'?
Suggestion: intensifies
...th is far better then telling a lie. It intensify bond between people and make more strog...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, second, secondly, so, then, for example, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 52.1666666667 59% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1977.66487455 66% => OK
No of words: 280.0 407.700716846 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.48103885553 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47673872136 2.67179642975 93% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 212.727598566 58% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442857142857 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 384.3 618.680645161 62% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.59856630824 21% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.1344086022 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.6606267297 48.9658058833 152% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.0 100.406767564 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.6045352989 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 5.45110844103 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.5376344086 108% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.85842293907 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241204170997 0.236089414692 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111588481983 0.076458572812 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0549557798862 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.157953458957 0.150856017488 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688128643332 0.0645574589148 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 11.7677419355 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 58.1214874552 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 10.9000537634 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.32 8.01818996416 79% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 86.8835125448 35% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.0537634409 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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