The best way for a society to prepare its young people
for leadership in government, industry, or other fields 1s
by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not
competition.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to
which you agree or disagree with the claim. In
developing and supporting your position, be sure to
address the most compelling reasons and/or examples
that could be used to challenge your position.
Leaders are a very important component in our modern human society - whether it be government leaders or corporate leaders. These are the people that are essentally tasked with leading the human race forward. As a result, it is imperative that we as a society make sure that we prepare the leaders of tomorrow in such a way that they will do better than their historical counterparts. For this to happen, i think instilling a sense of cooperation is more important than making them competitive towards each other.
Don't get me wrong, competition is an essential part in development of humans as well. Competitiveness after all is one of the fundamental traits that makes human want to improve themself day by day. A very good example of having no competition in human society is shown in the Hollywood movie, Wall-E. In it, it is shown that a human society with zero competition and hence zero desire for accomplishments will ultimately turn into overly obese people, who aren't even able to walk and do other basic tasks becuase they don't feel the need to as machines take care of everything and hence having healthy competitiveness is important.
Healthy competition, that's the important part. Instilling only a sense of competition in young people (which is not healthy) is a very good recipe for end of mankind. Having very competitive leaders at the helm can prove to be disastrous for a nation and even the world. Unfortunately, we don't have to go too far to witness this. President and Leader of North Korea for example, is probably the most competitve leader (or at least tries to be) in the world and yet by having a look at the state of his country (most of the population under poverty, hostile environment throughout the country etc.), one can't help but wonder if blatant competitiveness really accomplishes anything. Even the President of United States, potrays himself as very competitive and non-cooperative in terms of sanctions and deals with other nations, and i think most of the americans know the opinion that people living outside of the US have of him.
Hence, i believe cooperation is certainly more important when it comes to leadership roles as countries like Japan and South Korea have shown. Both of these counties have prospered because of their cooperation whether it comes to trade deals with India or other BRICS nations or sanctions. Even China, to some extent is trying to cooperate with other countries and willing to make changes in order to accomplish their goal of rebuilding the infamous Silk Route. Not only government leaders, cooperation can be seen in Technology leaders as well. The top 4 technology companies in the world - Alphabet(Google), Amazon, Apple and Microsoft are planning to share data between them as to provide better resources for all of their users. Samsung provides Apple, it's biggest competitor in the mobile market, with displays that they use to make Iphones. There are so many other examples like these that show us that cooperation between different leaders lead to betterment of the whole society.
All in all, teaching our youth cooperation encourages diversity in opinions and gives them the ability to acknowledge and understand each other's perspective which instilling competitiveness won't, and hence this ability will certainly be very useful when these youth become the leaders of human kind in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, really, so, still, well, after all, as to, at least, for example, i think, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 77.0 58.6224719101 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 12.9106741573 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2820.0 2235.4752809 126% => OK
No of words: 561.0 442.535393258 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02673796791 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.86676880123 4.55969084622 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88648011597 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 288.0 215.323595506 134% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513368983957 0.4932671777 104% => OK
syllable_count: 901.8 704.065955056 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 6.24550561798 112% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 82.6655239079 60.3974514979 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.181818182 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 23.4991977007 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 5.21951772744 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 7.80617977528 154% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 10.2758426966 156% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.106449962154 0.243740707755 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339458270033 0.0831039109588 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358705359893 0.0758088955206 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0649831218411 0.150359130593 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0198729693134 0.0667264976115 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 14.1392134831 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.1639044944 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 100.480337079 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.83 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.25 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.