You have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course
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Write a letter to your tutor. In your letter
1- Describe the situation
2- Explain why you cannot continue at this time
3- Say what action you would like to take
You should write at least 150 words.
Dear Mr. Emad,
I am writing to inform you that I will be unable to continue in attending the part-time Project Management evening course.
I have been attending the evening classes over the last two months, and it is really an adding value to my knowledge. As I stated in my course application form, I work a full-time job at a large Engineering company. I hardly managed to fit the course into my personal schedule.
However, my company is currently on the verge of signing a new project with an important client in China, and I have been selected in the team that will study the tender documents and travel to Beijing to negotiate the terms and conditions. Hence, I committed with some additional works at evening for the next couple of months, and it will be impossible to continue with the booked evening classes. I will be probably travelling out of the country for several weeks.
Same course will be repeated after two months. Rather than try to catch up when I come from China, I was wondering if it is possible to join the course with the next cohort in October.
I look forward to receiving your acceptance on my request.
Yours sincerely,
Ayoub
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| 2019-08-11 | dangtheanh@gmail.com | 73 | view |
| 2018-08-06 | Khalsa kaur | 81 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 115, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... when I come from China, I was wondering if it is possible to join the course wit...
^^
Line 15, column 6, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...my request. Yours sincerely, Ayoub
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, if, look, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 975.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 206.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73300970874 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78849575616 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62911922243 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601941747573 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 301.5 290.88556701 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5591240382 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.6363636364 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7272727273 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27272727273 4.34317383033 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.14615643248 0.216113520407 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0543230289501 0.0766984524023 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0676528160645 0.0603063233224 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0878096480762 0.12726935374 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0911302555478 0.0580467560999 157% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 8.37731958763 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 70.7449484536 87% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.13 7.59969072165 107% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.